Feedback

Our UOI writing is in the part of the writing process where the authors are ready for feedback. Together as a class we read the texts about the body systems, gave compliments to what was well, and suggested some ways to improve. I believe that the writers felt good when their classmates commented on their catchy beginning, interesting facts, scientific yet child friendly text, colorful descriptions, and how well the texts sounded. The suggestions will hopefully make the good texts even better.

Once the texts are through the revision process, we can edit, add the visuals, and publish the texts.