Digital story workshop

Students:
How to add pictures?

How to add text and make it bigger?

How to add music?

How can I change the order of pictures?

Where can I see what I have so far?

Look, what I have made already!

Experimenting: A Cat Story

Revision: endings

Writes create powerful endings to leave a lasting impression on the reader.

A good ending can keep the reader thinking or carrying a feeling about the text long after it's finished. 

We looked at some different possibilities.

An ending with a message

An ending with a thought

An ending with a feeling

A surprising ending

A circular ending

Math: student teachers: part 3

Revision: transitions

What words and phrases help us to show passage of time, show two things happening at the same time, or move from one scene to another?

From: http://totallyterrificintexas.blogspot.com/2012/03/transition-words.html

Thank you, Patricia Polacco for the examples. The kids were able to recognize where these terms came from.

UOI: digital story

It took us a full lesson to listen to the different stories and interesting facts everyone was sharing from their interviews. I loved when students used phrases like "I didn't know..." or "It really surprised me..."

Now that the students have collected stories about their parents or grandparents through making a time-line, creating a Venn diagram, and conducting an interview, they can decide what they would like to include in their digital story. Like with any writing, they will make a draft first. We are using a paper comic strip to help to decide what pictures and texts they wish to include.

Math: student teachers: part 2

Revision: beginnings

Yesterday we read some beginnings from different books, looked at some collected examples and a list of possibilities for different beginnings. Then the students tried out three different leads for their own personal narratives and chose one to use intheir writing. The beginning is like an invitation. The writer has to make it interesting so the reader would wish to continue reading.

Math: student teachers: part 1

Estonoan Culture field trip: Bastion tunnels

We had an exciting (and a bit spooky) historical field trip to Bastion tunnels.
When you are looking for something to do on a weekend or for a place to take your visitors, this could be a place to go. It is not suitable for little children as it can be scary.

Digital story telling

We had a guest teacher Ms. Glycka in class today, leading a discussion of what makes a good digital story and playing with a new digital story app called Cute Cut.

A good digital story has

1. A story we want to tell that brings an emotion to the viewer.

2. Pictures or video that illustrate the story.

3.  Words that have to be chosen carefully dpending on the audience.

4. Music that fits with the mood of the story.

More revision

Adding dialogue to writing makes a story more livley. Today we looked at different ways one can include detail.

First I shared two of my writing examples with the students and right away they noticed how my first writing had only the spoken words in the dialogue but the second one had words and additional action to show what was happening when someone was speaking.

Then we looked how we can include how something was said or use a variation of the word "said."

Finally we looked  how the spoken words can come first, last or squeeze the speaker in between them.

Examples from: Crafting Writers by Elizabeth Hale

I haven't looked at the revised drafts yet. Tomorrow I will find out, how much of what I showed, the student chose to try out in their writing.
We will continue with revision for the next two weeks (word choice and sentence structure next week and text structure the week after.)

Blogging together

 

We have started blogging together. It is a closed blog right now. First we want to figure out what and how to blog, how to save and publish. Then we wish to learn how to write really good comments. When we have practiced a bit, we will be ready to share our writing with you and hope to get comments from you.  I will (when we are ready) put the link to the Slice of Grade 3 blog in this blog's sidebar for an easy access. Stay tuned.

In the head of the reader

The students already know that a lot goes on in the head of a reader. They also know that the different strategies that the readers use, don't happen in isolation. When you ask questions, you use your background knowledge ( connections) to find some answers. Sometimes you read a text and have to use your background knowledge and experience to make sense of what is happening, why the characters are acting in a certain way, what they are feeling, and what might happen. This strategy is called inferring. This is already higher level thinking and asks the reader to look beyond the literal meaning of the text.

On Monday and Tuesday I read....

..and we talked about the feelings and thoughts of the characters, about thoughtlessly destroying something that is valuable to someone else, about the difficulties of apologizing, and about apologies with action.

Today I started reading....

..and since it was a text with a new text structure for us, we had to first figure out who the characters were and what was going on. The whole book is written in a form of a dialogue. I look forward to reading on tomorrow.

Digging deeper into family stories

Ms.Helelyn came this Monday and gave useful advice on how to interview parents or grandparents.

Then she paired the students up and they got to practice both roles -the interviewer (asking questions) and the interviewee (answering questions.)

I hope that the interviews are going well at home and the adults have fun remembering their childhood and telling stories. Don't be timid to share stories that maybe were not asked in the interviews. 

First draft written and moving on

On Monday we reviewed all the advice the students had put together to help the,selves to write the best first draft. The. They wrote, wrote, wrote. 

Yesterday I showed them their first drafts and pointed out what they had done well already. 

Some of them had a lot of writing, all of them had chosen a topic that mattered to them, some stories reminded me of other stories we had read ( this is a positive thing  for a young writer -  to write  like another author.)

The students already knew that writers write many drafts to revise their work to have the best possible choice of words, voice and structure.

On Monday we looked at different ways to include senses. Today we looked at different ways to include feelings and thoughts. One of the students mentioned that we should have had examples of including some older memories into our narratives. Such great writerly thinking.

After looking at the examples, the students experimented with different sentences that they could include in their personal narratives. We will explore and experiment with dialogue tomorrow.

This is just a beginning. More revision waits for us next week.

Examples from: Crafting Writers by Elizabeth Hale